Fate-Touch the Fluffy Tail by DivJustice on DeviantArt

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Follow-up, kind of, here: fav.me/d999tm5
Theme for immersion purposes (mentioned in the story): www.youtube.com/watch?v=cUs8FE…
Cover: fav.me/d98b9d8
Preview image: sta.sh/21sjby9727zp
One of my longest stories, with a total wordcount of 35.000 I can say that I'm proud with this. The fantastic

asked, as always for an "Ar Tonelico" commission starring...
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WAIT A MOMENT!!!
This is not "Ar Tonelico", what a twist! www.youtube.com/watch?v=rPseOl… .Jokes asides, as you can see, he's not obsessed with that saga, there are plenty of things you can talk with him about and this time "Fate/Stay Night: Unlimited Blade Works" was the idea he approached me for a story. In few words, this is a "what if?" story where the infamous scene of Caster (Medea) torturing Saber (Arturia) gets changed; what if in during that arc Tamamo no Mae was the Caster summoned instead of Medea? Read this story to find the answer to this question. Also, expect a nice surprise at the very end!

Saber, Rin Tohsaka, Sakura Matou, Caster and all of the characters mentioned are copyrighted by Type-Moon. Except for certain cameo, those are copyrighted by someone.

Fun facts:
-The tittle was the client's idea.
-It's funnybecause, originally, long time ago a client who wants to remain anonymous asked for a commission story on which the original idea from the game/show, that is, Medea torturing Saber would be enhanced and expanded with tickling. But it had a darker tone than this one. In the end he thought that he rather wanted a story about another franchise (we are still discussing the details). I thought it was sad that all the cool ideas we had would be wasted. Then tickletickletickler told me that he wanted this. What a coincidence! Needless to say, some of these ideas were salvaged for the one you have here. So the joke at the end with Medea has a reason to be!
-I didn't know about Tamamo no Mae, but now I've grown quite fond of her.
-So many jokes I wanted to pull out, and I did!
-The long wordcount is due to me getting the story delayed for a week. Originally we agreed on 20.000 words byt this is my way to compensate for said delay.
-It was also quite a coincidence that some friends of mine hooked me to "Fate Grand Order", now Fate is something fresh for all of us. (I got Arturia in the game :3).
-Writing some of the most humorous ticklish moment felt weird when listening to this www.youtube.com/watch?v=2dmrr3… so anticlimatic XD
-After all this time with this being around I realised I didn't put a link to the "sequel".

Iamanidiotnow Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2016

Explain further.

DivJustice Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2016

What has to be explained? Just read the story and enjoy (or not, it depends from person, to person).

Bragathus Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2015 Hobbyist Artist

Quite easily the best Fate tickle fic I have ever read, quite honestly you put my one to shame

and I understand that English is not your first language? If this is the case, an even bigger well done. Excellent work, faved. :) (Smile)

DivJustice Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2015

I work as an English teacher so English is not that of a big deal for me. But thanks a lot for the compliment, I must say that since I really like this franchise (read the description to learn more about it) I enjoyed a lot writing this. That aside I will surely take a look at your fic, after all Medea has granted us with inspiration to torment Saber.
PS: Also check the follow up of this story. I hope you will like is as much as you did with the one at hand divjustice.deviantart.com/art/…

blind-assassin-kiel Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2015

me impresiona lo mucho lo larga que es tu historia, pero ademas imitaste el estilo de type-moon y hasta pusiste un extra al final. me quito el sombrero antes usted señor, sigue con ese entusiasmo! a ver que nos preparas en el futuro.

DivJustice Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2015

Es que Fate me lo pasé entero, 90 horas de juego acumuladas, incluyendo todas las muertes. Así que pensé que era esencial hacer un Taiga Dojo aquí.
Por cierto, adelanto de lo que está por venir: mira el último párrafo de dicho dojo.
Muchas gracias por los cumplidos.

yamiyugi101 Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2015

it would have been very fun if goats got introduced I can just picture their horrified faces great job man it had me laughing along with them a few spelling mistakes but hey no ones perfect I like how you added taiga and illiya at the end it was funny with the fourth wall breaking all in all I give it a 9.9/10 truly enjoyable near perfect story give yourself a pat on the back you outdid yourself truly godlike work :D (Big Grin)

DivJustice Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2015

I woulnd't mind adding the goats, as you can see in many of my works I really like the idea of animals tickling girls with their tongues, but I thought it would get boring since I might have used that resource a lot lately. Anyway, I'm happy that you liked it and that you laughed while reading, it was more or less my objective. And about the grammar errors, I swear I did a grammar check but something this big is ought to have a few hidden. Care to point out any that really caught your atention?
Thanks for the kind words, but I'll try them not to reach me too much, or else I'll slack off thinking I'm too good, and that's bad, there's always room for improvement

yamiyugi101 Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2015

the goat addition would be cool I didn't see any that we're distracting you're welcome I've followed your account for awhile you are very excellent but you're right there's always room for improvement but I think lately you've been improving greatly I always laugh at tickling scenes especially with strong serious characters I am nearly finished with fate zero and then onto ubw I know enough to follow your story but my question is if the holy grail is so dangerous and evil why don't they just be like I wish the holy grail would disappear forever sorry I tend to ramble but anyway for someone who's second language is English you use it better than most Americans I know :D (Big Grin)

DivJustice Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2015

I can't help but to agree with youabout the goats, but take this into account: the story is already very long as it is and I had to include certain parts on it, as a commission, I have to deliver something the commissioner asked. Don't worry, there'll be plenty of time for goats in the future, actually in a not very distant one...You inspirted me to add them to something I'm planning

I also agree on the part of having improved lately, but I disagree on it being a lot. I'll just say I'm happy to see I'm advancing with my skills which is quite satisfactory.
Regarding that part of the Fate lore. Well nobody asks for the Grail to be distroyed becasuse nobody realises is evil until they get to see it. And allow me to remind you tha the heroic spirits usually have their memories erased after each war. Arturia was a special case, but... SPOILERshe never gets to see it in Zero, so she doesn't notice its risksEND OF SPOILER. However if you haven't watched UBW or read Heaven's Feel I'm afraid I have spoiled a few thing on this story.
Also, thanks for the compliment in the language, I've studied a lot of the language and I make a living thanks to it, so it's no surprise, not to mention I'm in contact with it everyday, one way or another. Also, about many English Speakers not using it properly, I spoke with some people about it. When you are a native the language is something natural for you, but for a foreigner is not, that's why I tend to work harder to speak properly, in comparission with some English speakers you would just laid it off a little.
Who tends to ramble a lot? XD
PS: Don't feel offended by this, but could you please use some punctuation marks on your comments? It's a bit hard to follow were one of your ideas end and when the next start... -_-'

yamiyugi101 Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2015

I understand commissions and all that. I see now on the lore. I tend to ramble it's my habit, you're welcome also I apologize for my bad punctuation. when I was younger I had brain damage I couldn't fix until 2014. I had a ton of metal poison in my brain, so I couldn't learn properly. I already heard the majority of fate already I can't go anywhere without spoilers.

DivJustice Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2015

I see, sorry if I brought something I shouldn't.
And yeah, it's a hard world to escape from the threat of the spoilers

yamiyugi101 Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2015

it's okay I have it fixed. yeah spoilers are everywhere have you read the latest fairy tail chapter it's pretty good

DivJustice Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2015

I'm glad to read that. And about Fairy Tail, unfortunately I don't follow that mamga. No special reason though.

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KaijSorel Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2015

This did felt like something out of Carnival Phantasm. Quite the fun read.

DivJustice Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2015

That's one of the best compliments I could get. I wanted to induce that feeling in the readers, at least in the final part

chickeninthemorning Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2015 Hobbyist Writer

Jeez, puts my stuff to shame, in terms of length alone. But, nicely done. I'll have to give this a proper read later.

DivJustice Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2015

Don't be like that it's a problem I got: to write more than I should

And be sure to share your thought on it when you have the time to read, which will be a lot, this one is quite long.

deltahuntress Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2015 Hobbyist Artist

Fantastic story!!

DivJustice Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2015

Thanks a lot, you sure read fast! Any special part that you enjoyed the most?

deltahuntress Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2015 Hobbyist Artist

Hmm nope x3

DivJustice Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2015

Anda what about the other way around? Anything that you didn't like that much?

deltahuntress Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2015 Hobbyist Artist

The ending seemed rushed ;^;

DivJustice Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2015

Just what I thought. I'll try to fix that in future writings

Thanks for the critique!

deltahuntress Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2015 Hobbyist Artist

Welcome, Sir. Alwayd glsd to help ^^

Hollowtaker Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2015

Wow DivJustice you must of work hard this is the longest comission story you write and I must say the story is pretty good and well written. I be wating for more work from you and also that Persona 4 x DOA Story I will wait patiently for that as well.

DivJustice Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2015

The longest which doesn't consist on more than one chapter. I'm glad that you liked it, much effort was put into this and I wish I could have more free time to work on your idea. You patience is much appretiated.
Any specific part that you liked the most, by the way?

Hollowtaker Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2015

My favorite part of the story is Rin, Sakura and Saber getting tickle I feel bad for these girls getting tickle by their kidnapper.

DivJustice Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2015

I see, thanks for commenting

mixmariobros Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2015

ostia puta 48 paginas xD a pesar de tener la ventaja de haber tenido estudios literarios como tienes no creo que eso haya llevado unos minutillos que digamos

, con ese titulo que le has puesto ya veo que Caster va a tener un papel estelar ahy

y bueno, para ser sincero es una lastima que no le haya tocado al ar tonelico que me parece que es el unico que se centra en esa serie (yo soy un cabron y podria haber colaborado un poco pero a la hora de la verdad siempre me acabo tirando por las series de ASW

) pero el fate tambien esta decentillo y bastante pidio de la otra serie ya xD, ya le echare una ojeada luego a la historia a ver que el mobil no me deja abrir PDFs , ya tenia yo la excusa para pasar el rato en el tren pero el mobil es una mierda coño -_- , en fin, a ver luego que tal

DivJustice Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2015

La verdad es que no, tendría que haber hecho 20.000 palabras la semana pasada, pero con lo de Spain Tickling se me fue el tiempo así que como ya no había tanta prisa me explayé y escribí a gusto. El título por cierto no es cosa mía, como ya he actualizado en la descripción, pero sí, digamos que cae mucho protagonismo en esa Caster.
Entiendo que Ar Tonelico es una saga que se merece más atención pero si me llega a tocar escribir sobre ella no sale una historia tan "única" como esta, porque aún no me he puesto a jugar a ningún juego de la saga.
Sobre lo de los PDFs, mira la store de tu móvil, seguro que hay algún lector gratis que te sirva

manjumemajeur Featured By Owner Edited Sep 4, 2015

35 000 words? That's enormous! Especially for a fetish story!

My own fics are ridiculous compared to yours.

I wrote a french foot fetish fan fiction. It's not over yet, but I have only around 8 000 words. But you have like 4 times more words with an ENGLISH story? That's really amazing. Especially because english is not your native language!

I can't imagine how much time it took to you to write this.

Can you do me a favor? I'd like you to read some of my fics and tell me if you see something bad in my writing style. My english is not as good as your, so I thought you might give me some tips to improve the text.

Also, I include pics of the involved characters in the introduction of my fics. so you'll know if it's a /F story or not (even if I know you're not found of /M stuff. I still think you can enjoy some of my /M fics if the involved male character is girly enough).

DivJustice Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2015

La première chose que je vais dire est youtu.be/-r7dveDEv-I tu toujours t'uoublies de me parler dans ta langue XD
C'est un problème que j'ai, c'est díficil pour moi d'ecrire plus petit XD
Et pour écriver cette histoire la? Un peut beaucoup de temps. Autant, si je ne m'importerai de lire des histoires par toi, est-ce qu'il y à unes laquelles tu est le plus orgulleux?

manjumemajeur Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2015

Ne te sens pas obligé de le faire si tu ne veux pas ou que tu n'as pas assez de temps pour ça.

DivJustice Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2015

Ne t'inquiete pas, desolé pour n'avoir pas te repondu, ma tête etait dans autre place là. Je vais surement lire une ou deux de tes histoires (mais j'ai deja lu "when fire and water are in love", est-ce que tu as oublie que a fait un desin par cette histoire?

), je ne puex te dire quand, mais je le ferais, je promis.

manjumemajeur Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2015

Non je n'ai pas oublié ce (magnifique) dessin que tu avais fait. En tous cas, si tu vois quoi que se ça soit qui puisse être amélioré n'hésite pas à le dire.

DivJustice Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2015

Un peut de patience, s'il te plait

manjumemajeur Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2015

Désolé, j'ai oublié de parler français. et à propos d'une histoire que j'aimerai te faire lire ... hum ... prends en une au hasard. Évite cependant celles qui ont "chapter" dans le titre, parce que se sont des chapitres de mon histoire interactive. Si possible, je préférerai que tu lises une histoire "classique".

Si tu veux je te fais une liste par genre (/F et /M).

/F (sauf les chapitres de l'histoire interactive):

"cream and vanilla"

"young pokemon girls foot fun"

/M (traps)

"Who said social mixity was impossible" (trap and reverse foot worship)

/M (garçons qui ne sont pas trop masculins: pas de forte carrure, pas de barbe ou de moustache)

"Izzy x Mimi" (reverse foot worship)

"See where your adoration conducts you" (reverse foot worship).

"When wind and water are in love" (reverse foot worship)

"The diary of a tiny alchemist" (reverse foot worship with macro/micro situation).

"A tamed water bender" (reverse foot worship).

Quant aux autres, je ne crois pas qu'elles puissent t'intéresser car les personnages impliqués sont "virils" (si tu vois ce que je veux dire).

Tu peux sélectionner n'importe laquelle parmi celles que j'ai évoqué. Elles sont toutes dans la ma galerie. J'ai aussi fait des sections différents en fonction de l'anime/du jeu vidéo de provenance. Aussi n'oublie pas que j'inclus toujours des images des personnages impliqués pour t'aider à imaginer la scène. Mais aussi (au cas où tu ne connais pas les personnages dont il est question) t'éviter d'aller les chercher sur google.

Tu peux aussi en lire plusieurs. Une fois cela fait, j'aimerai que tu me donnes des conseils pour "enrichir" le texte et l'améliorer. Je vois bien qu'il manque quelque chose. Je ne dis pas que mes histoires sont mauvaises, mais les tiennes sont bien meilleur parce que tu arrives à bien étoffer tes histoires.